Adding Description to Introduce Characters and Their Motivation

In this video, the teacher discusses the importance of introducing characters and adding description to their motivations in order to engage readers. Using an example story about a Boy Scout named Derek, the teacher guides students in brainstorming reasons why Derek wants to win the survival contest and give the prize money to his family. The teacher then helps students revise the introduction to include Derek's motivation and create a stronger connection between the reader and the main character. By doing so, the teacher emphasizes the importance of making the reader care about and root for the protagonist's success.